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pretty good

i thought it was good that you did stick to a character but i didnt really follow the whole storyline... if there was one, good job anyway, hope to see more

its alright

notes and music dont really match, and it sounded more like a bass than a guitar, the notes sounded more like just sliding across the strings, it needs work

it was good

i found a glitch, when jumped out of the green vent behind the basketball hoop, i disappear and end up back in the vent

this was good, i actually learned somthing

you should make more, and to 7isunlucky, he did spell origami correctly, you spell it correctly